Author's Note: In the reading lab Ms. Hanson read us a 3:15 story and had us predict what was going to happen to Jamie. This is what I thought what was going to happen.
I think that the wind is coming from the reflecting pool and that she is going to see Mrs. Prat in the mirror repeating the phrase "Don't take anything from the store." I also think that Jamie has started to feel really bad so she is going to run to the store and go tell Mrs. Prat what she did and Mrs. Prat is going to be sitting in the big plush chair and hold up the jewelry and say "I know." and smile.
Brittany's LA
Tuesday, November 20, 2012
Thursday, November 15, 2012
Character Development
Author’s Note: In the readin lab we leearned about Character Development. This is My Character Development piece with the books Deep Down Popular and Pictures of Hollis Woods.
A shy girl, practically hiding in the shadows. Her crush, the most popular guy in school, suddenly gets a bad limp and has to start wearing a leg brace. Her teacher picks her of all the other students to help this boy while his leg is injured. Her dream is coming true. From then now, her friendship with him grows and she completely transforms into a much more confident person. In Deep Down Popular by Phoebe Stone, Jessie Lou is the girl who changes from shy to confident around her crush, Conrad Parker Smith.
At first, Jessie Lou has no clue what to say to Conrad. To her, he’s way too popular to even acknowledge her. She just thinks that she’s the girl in the back of the room, in a completely different world then Conrad. Jessie Lou has liked Conrad since they were little, as it says in the book “In second grade I covered Conrad with kisses whenever I could. In third I gave up my swing or my cookie or my bus seat coming home. By fifth grade I never said anything to him at all”. You see, as time goes on she becomes farther and farther from him. So by the time she’s in sixth grade, during the time of the story, she’s shier than ever.
After Jessie Lou’s teacher picks her to help Conrad, it’s whole new step. She has to talk to him now. Soon she even relieves that. When they both started to hang out, Jessie Lou just talked the bare minimal to her crush, like when they were first walking home together. What broke the ice was when Conrad’s bike fell into the river and she pulls it out. From then on they start to really communicate. The more she’s around Conrad, the more she seems to talk to him. Their friendship grows until the end, when Conrad kisses her on the cheek. “Conrad’s kiss feels like a little butterfly fluttering against my cheek” as she says and for any girl, their crush kissing them is a dream come true.
This change is like Hollis from Pictures of Hollis Woods, who is a girl who has been from foster home to foster home. When she is sent to Josie, she could care less. She barely wants to be there, but soon she starts warming up to Josie, their friendship becomes very strong. By the end of the book, Hollis would do anything to be stay with Josie because she finally feels wanted. Hollis and Jessie Lou change in almost the same way by growing a strong friendship.
The shy girl comes out of the corner and starts being herself around her crush. Just by having more confidence, Jessie Lou completely changes her relationship with Conrad. Throughout the book, she completely changes for the good and her shyness completely floats away. By that point, she is like a completely different girl.
A shy girl, practically hiding in the shadows. Her crush, the most popular guy in school, suddenly gets a bad limp and has to start wearing a leg brace. Her teacher picks her of all the other students to help this boy while his leg is injured. Her dream is coming true. From then now, her friendship with him grows and she completely transforms into a much more confident person. In Deep Down Popular by Phoebe Stone, Jessie Lou is the girl who changes from shy to confident around her crush, Conrad Parker Smith.
At first, Jessie Lou has no clue what to say to Conrad. To her, he’s way too popular to even acknowledge her. She just thinks that she’s the girl in the back of the room, in a completely different world then Conrad. Jessie Lou has liked Conrad since they were little, as it says in the book “In second grade I covered Conrad with kisses whenever I could. In third I gave up my swing or my cookie or my bus seat coming home. By fifth grade I never said anything to him at all”. You see, as time goes on she becomes farther and farther from him. So by the time she’s in sixth grade, during the time of the story, she’s shier than ever.
After Jessie Lou’s teacher picks her to help Conrad, it’s whole new step. She has to talk to him now. Soon she even relieves that. When they both started to hang out, Jessie Lou just talked the bare minimal to her crush, like when they were first walking home together. What broke the ice was when Conrad’s bike fell into the river and she pulls it out. From then on they start to really communicate. The more she’s around Conrad, the more she seems to talk to him. Their friendship grows until the end, when Conrad kisses her on the cheek. “Conrad’s kiss feels like a little butterfly fluttering against my cheek” as she says and for any girl, their crush kissing them is a dream come true.
This change is like Hollis from Pictures of Hollis Woods, who is a girl who has been from foster home to foster home. When she is sent to Josie, she could care less. She barely wants to be there, but soon she starts warming up to Josie, their friendship becomes very strong. By the end of the book, Hollis would do anything to be stay with Josie because she finally feels wanted. Hollis and Jessie Lou change in almost the same way by growing a strong friendship.
The shy girl comes out of the corner and starts being herself around her crush. Just by having more confidence, Jessie Lou completely changes her relationship with Conrad. Throughout the book, she completely changes for the good and her shyness completely floats away. By that point, she is like a completely different girl.
Thursday, November 8, 2012
Patriot's Pen
Author's Note: This is my Patriot's Pen that I did in the writing lab. This piece is about the pro's and con's about our very own U.S.A
Hey Everyone! I'm from the future, and I know what happens after you sign that piece of paper you have there, so I just wanted to let you know what happens later, in case you want to change some things.
First off, some really good things happen like 1. We all have freedom, 5 major ones actually, freedom of speech, religion, freedom of the press, petition and to assemble peaceably. It's pretty awesome, it takes a little while to get used to over the years but later it will work, somethings that get changed are that woman will have more freedom and even later colored people will too, because right now you are just benefiting yourself's and other white men which is really, really unfair. Colored men and woman get to vote from the time that I'm from which is really nice, I don't exactly approve of the president but that's not what you should be worried about. Secondly, in the future, Education is much, much better. Kids now use a device called computers, which has all of the resources you could ever need and with these, kids do way better in school. For example, if a student wanted to know what a capital of a state was or how stars were created, all they would have to do is look it up on his or her computer. It's very nice to say the least but it's not all fun and games, there are some pretty bad things going on later in the future.
The first bad thing I would have to name off is Discrimination. Most people accept the fact that colored people are equal to us, but others not so much. Some people just see colored people differently, they tend to categorize them as drug dealers, street walkers or even terrorists.
Sunday, October 28, 2012
Conflict Resolution
Author’s Note: In the Reading Lab we learned about conflicts and resolutions in a novel. I chose to analyze the conflict and its resolution in the book Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
Harry Potter, is a boy who was born to two wizards. He has gone through a long journey of six wonderful years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, but each year is chances of living are getting smaller by the second. With his two best friends, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger, the three of them battle Lord Voldemort, the evil wizard, and his deathly followers, the death eaters. When Harry was young, Voldemort murdered Harry’s parents and disappeared after his attempt to kill Harry as a baby. At his last year at Hogwarts Harry finds to know that there is a way to kill and defeat Lord Voldemort, to find and destroy all six Horcruxes, which are well hidden and defended by the Lord himself. Harry must find these Horcruxes, that Lord Voldemort created for him to live forever, without him knowing and kill the Lord before time runs out.
Throughout the book, Harry finds these six Horcruxes, the Sword of Gryffindor, the Slytherin locket, the Hufflepuff cup, Marvolo’s ring, Ravenclaw’s diadem, Tom Riddle’s diary, and Nagini. To kill Voldemort, Harry must destroy these objects that Voldemort created. After finding and extinguishing the six Horcruxes, Harry thinks that he has destroyed all of them. But there is a seventh one, Harry himself. In order to kill Voldemort Harry must die, and so he does, but at the end he was not dead, using the stone of resurrection, he wakes up and kills Lord Voldemort. There are so many details that are put into this book in order for people to understand all of these different objects that were made for this series. The life of Harry Potter, is different and hard to understand, but it is also very interesting. Harry Potter, is a wizard of full potential is known to all of the world. His story is told from one generation to the other, and each time it is told, it never gets old.
Harry Potter, is a boy who was born to two wizards. He has gone through a long journey of six wonderful years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, but each year is chances of living are getting smaller by the second. With his two best friends, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger, the three of them battle Lord Voldemort, the evil wizard, and his deathly followers, the death eaters. When Harry was young, Voldemort murdered Harry’s parents and disappeared after his attempt to kill Harry as a baby. At his last year at Hogwarts Harry finds to know that there is a way to kill and defeat Lord Voldemort, to find and destroy all six Horcruxes, which are well hidden and defended by the Lord himself. Harry must find these Horcruxes, that Lord Voldemort created for him to live forever, without him knowing and kill the Lord before time runs out.
Throughout the book, Harry finds these six Horcruxes, the Sword of Gryffindor, the Slytherin locket, the Hufflepuff cup, Marvolo’s ring, Ravenclaw’s diadem, Tom Riddle’s diary, and Nagini. To kill Voldemort, Harry must destroy these objects that Voldemort created. After finding and extinguishing the six Horcruxes, Harry thinks that he has destroyed all of them. But there is a seventh one, Harry himself. In order to kill Voldemort Harry must die, and so he does, but at the end he was not dead, using the stone of resurrection, he wakes up and kills Lord Voldemort. There are so many details that are put into this book in order for people to understand all of these different objects that were made for this series. The life of Harry Potter, is different and hard to understand, but it is also very interesting. Harry Potter, is a wizard of full potential is known to all of the world. His story is told from one generation to the other, and each time it is told, it never gets old.
Cause and Effect
Author’s Note: This piece was written for a cause and effect assignment on the novel Cinder.
In the novel Cinder I believe that the climax could be when Cinder finds out she is one of the moon people, or a Lunar. This event like most has both a cause and some, in this case major, effects.
Since Cinder is a cyborg her stepmother can volunteer to be researched on to try and find a cure for the plague. Cinder relationship with her stepmother is tenuous at best so when one of Cinder’s sisters contracts the plague the stepmother snaps and sends Cinder away. And the tests performed at the research center lead Cinder to find out she is a Lunar.
Now being a Lunar might not have mattered, if the Lunar’s queen wasn’t visiting Earth. Or if this visiting monarch had no problem with Lunars living in secret on Earth. Unfortunately the queen was both visiting and intent on getting all Lunars to live on the moon. So of course Cinder is found out. This gives her two options, run or kill the queen. And in typical sci-fi fashion Cinder chooses the latter.
When she storms into the ball Cinder plans to tell the Emperor of the Queen’s intentions but he when he doesn’t act she is forced to take matters into her own hands. To make a long, gruesome story short she kills the queen, is imprisoned, escapes and leaves for Africa.
So Cinder’s stepmother always assumed that she’d be rid of Cinder forever by way of sending her to be a research subject. But her choice was never meant to give her a reason to move to anywhere but a shallow hole in the ground.
In the novel Cinder I believe that the climax could be when Cinder finds out she is one of the moon people, or a Lunar. This event like most has both a cause and some, in this case major, effects.
Since Cinder is a cyborg her stepmother can volunteer to be researched on to try and find a cure for the plague. Cinder relationship with her stepmother is tenuous at best so when one of Cinder’s sisters contracts the plague the stepmother snaps and sends Cinder away. And the tests performed at the research center lead Cinder to find out she is a Lunar.
Now being a Lunar might not have mattered, if the Lunar’s queen wasn’t visiting Earth. Or if this visiting monarch had no problem with Lunars living in secret on Earth. Unfortunately the queen was both visiting and intent on getting all Lunars to live on the moon. So of course Cinder is found out. This gives her two options, run or kill the queen. And in typical sci-fi fashion Cinder chooses the latter.
When she storms into the ball Cinder plans to tell the Emperor of the Queen’s intentions but he when he doesn’t act she is forced to take matters into her own hands. To make a long, gruesome story short she kills the queen, is imprisoned, escapes and leaves for Africa.
So Cinder’s stepmother always assumed that she’d be rid of Cinder forever by way of sending her to be a research subject. But her choice was never meant to give her a reason to move to anywhere but a shallow hole in the ground.
Thursday, October 11, 2012
Sleeping Adventure
Why did I have to wake up so early? Oh yeah, because I had a
plane to catch.
“BRITTANY MARIE! GET UP WE HAVE TO GO!” yelled my mother.
“MOM GIVE ME FIVE MORE MINUTES” I hoarsely yelled back.
“NOW BRITTANY” she responded.
I sighed, I didn’t want to wake up yet I was still really
tired and it was 4 in the morning, the sun hasn’t even come up yet! I looked
outside, then at my suitcase, then at my blankets. Oh how conferrable they were
and how enchanting, they were just begging me to stay and sleep for a good 5
hours more. I sighed again and I got up out of bed, my legs feeling like
noodles, and I started to the bathroom.
I looked at myself in the mirror, ‘Wow look at that bed head’ I thought
to myself as I started brushing out all of the knots in my hair. After my hair
was done I went back to my room and started getting dressed
In a nice long sleeve shirt, a sweatshirt and shorts.
“ARE YOU READY?” my mother shouted from upstairs.
“YEAH MOM” I said as I headed upstairs.
As I made my way slowly up the stairs I went through my
mental checklist, Phone, check. Tablet, check. Toothbrush, check. Clothes,
check. Everything else, I think check. I nodded to myself as I made my way to
my mother’s bedroom.
“Hey mom, I have everything and I’m ready to go.” I said as
I looked up and saw her on the bed still in pajamas.
“Ok mija I will get up in a minute” She replied.
I stood in the doorway with absolute shock on my face. How
can she still be in bed! Why is she still in bed?! In her pajamas no less! Why
did she even wake me up! I stood there for about a minute, trying to calm
myself a little bit, and then headed to the staircase.
“Where are you going? Stay up here and wait for me.” She
called
“Nah, I think I’m going to go back to bed” I told her,
trying my best to hide the anger in my voice.
“What do you mean you’re ‘going back to bed’ we are leaving
soon” She said with a hint of anger.
“Well, you’re in your pajamas and still not up so I guess I
should be the same way” I snapped
I heard her sigh “Ok fine” the bed groaned “Here look, I’m
up now so just come sit in here, I will be ready in five minutes.” She said
I smiled “Ok mommy”
She got dressed and we headed for the car and started our
journey to the airport.
“Hey mom, is that it up there?” I asked pointing up ahead to
the large building on the horizon.
“Yup we are almost there” She said smiling.
“Good because my butt really hurts” I laughed
Once we got there we got our stuff out of the car and headed
inside. We headed to a machine that gave us our tickets and weighed our bags,
and stared heading for the terminal.
“Mom, I think we are going the wrong way, the ticket says
A-56 this is A-26.” I said
“Brittany, I think you are right” She said as she looked at
the ticket. “You lead”
Once I got us on track we realized we only had 10 minutes
until the plane started boarding. We rushed to the terminal and to our surprise
we got there just in time. The attendants checked our bags and we got on the
plane. First we were headed to Cincinnati.
“This is a very nice plane” I said as I looked around.
“Very nice indeed. Have you got everything you need?” She
asked
“Yeah I got my book, my tablet and a blanket” I said as I
held each one up as I named them.
“Good mija, now go to sleep you are going to need your
energy, our next layover time is 5 hours” She said as she took out her book. I
groaned as I laid my head on her lap and drifted off into sleep. I awoke about
an hour later and somehow at our next terminal.
“Mom? How did I get here?” I asked as I tried to get my
bearings
“What do you mean? You walked here sweaty.” She said,
confused.
“Don’t you remember? We got off the plane and you said you
were hungry so we got sandwiches and then came here and you have been playing
on that tablet since then” she explained.
“Mom, I just woke up. I don’t remember any of that all I
remember is falling asleep on the plane.” I said, as I looked down at the
tablet in my hands.
She stared at me in shock. “So you’re saying that you walked
all the way to the restaurant, ate a whole double decker sandwich, and played
on your tablet while sleeping?” She
asked in shock .
I burped and laughed. “I suppose so”
“You are one strange child” She said shaking her head.
“ Thanks mom, really thanks.” I said sarcastically.
She pulled me into a hug and smiled, “You’re very welcome
sweaty”
I rolled my eyes and decided to go back to sleep. I awoke
again only in a different airport.
“Don’t tell me” I groaned.
“Oh god, were you asleep again when you came in here too?”
She asked?
I sighed, “What adventures did I take this time?”
“Well, you went to the bathroom, you ate again, you flirted
with a boy and you have been texting for about an hour now.” She said.
“Wow…….. I wonder if I got that boys number.” I said as I looked
through my phone.
“Oh god Brittany.” She said rolling her eyes.
“Was he cute?” I asked giggling.
She sighed and paused for a minute. “Yes, he was cute, I
think you took a picture with him”
“Cool” I said. I looked through my phone and found the picture
with a random stranger boy, a cute
random stranger boy I might add. “Sweeeet” I said looking at the picture. I
wonder who I was texting. I looked at my inbox and found that I was texting a
boy named, Felix. I don’t know a Felix so I assumed he was the boy, my
assumption was right. Apparently we had been texting each other about ourselves
and to my surprise he ended up living only a couple doors down from me.
“Wow” I said out loud.
“What?” My mother asked.
“Oh…nothing” I said as I started texting Felix again.
“We are going to board the plane soon” She said.
“Ok good, maybe I can sleep I am sooo tired” I yawned.
“You have got to be joking! You have been sleeping almost
this entire time!” She said shocked once more.
“Hey! Sleep walking, eating and flirting take a lot of work!
I have to keep my strength up” I said smirking.
“Now boarding Flight
B-23, Now boarding Flight B-23 zone 2 I repeat B-23 Zone 2”
“That’s us” I said as I grabbed my luggage and headed on the
plane.
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Book retelling
Wurhering Heights Book Advertisement
By: Brittany Aiello
Heathcliff is a wealthy man
with everything he’s ever wanted money, carriages, things, except he is missing one thing, the love and affection of
the women he loves. What lengths will he go to win her over?
Genera- Romance, drama,
realistic fiction/historical fiction.
Author- Emily Bronte
I recommend this book for girls mostly for the romance and drama but boys could possibly learn a thing or two from Heathcliff.
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